I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Ka pai sharing your completed work. I want you to take a look at this blog post and see if it is your best work. I think that you could improve on your introduction with some simple corrections!
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Today we have been making something for the all blacks and things i know, things i want to know, things i Know now. Here it is
Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteKa pai sharing your completed work. I want you to take a look at this blog post and see if it is your best work. I think that you could improve on your introduction with some simple corrections!
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