I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Today I was making a poster for the all blacks and for what they have done for our country they represent out Country New Zealand BIG TIME so I made a poster Thanking them Here it is
Hi Josh I like how have gave introduction what you have being doing for CIP. next time could you put your word bigger so people can see it great work Josh keep it up.
Hello Josh, I really like your poster, It looks like it took you alot of time and effort, Maybe next time you could write more in your blurb about why you made this poster, But otherwise this is a good post. Keep it up. ă
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Kia ora Josh
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your poster. Where is the excellent drawing you were doing on the paper? I would love to see this on your blog as well.
- Miss Birtch
Hi Josh I like how have gave introduction what you have being doing for CIP. next time could you put your word bigger so people can see it great work Josh keep it up.
ReplyDeleteHello Josh, I really like your poster, It looks like it took you alot of time and effort, Maybe next time you could write more in your blurb about why you made this poster, But otherwise this is a good post. Keep it up. ă
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