For my novel study, I have been reading a book called playing to win.
The main character in the storys name is Denny, He moved to a new place, He went to school, enrolled for it, got a ford escort, got a job at a video store for money to make his 2 seven year old sisters, He is a rugby player. the first day he had at school there was a person called Todd, Todd constantly bullied Denny, Then after school Todd wanted to race, as the lights turned green they took off, Todd car stalled and Denny won, How humiliating.
Denny picks up his sisters and took them to ther park, He played rugby with them, then next time Denny saw Todd he shoved Denny so Denny put a crab on him and it kept nipping him.
Good job Josh. That´s an accurate recap. There are some things that need to be fixed like capitals on Todd's name. You might need to just check next time. Anyway good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Josh.
ReplyDeleteI noticed that you haven't added a personal comment and that there are some mistakes so just take a couple of minutes to fix it up but other than that I think it's good.
Kia Ora Josh,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog post and how you got straight to the point. Maybe next time you could double check that your work makes sense.
Kind Regards,
Shelby