I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how you added your reasoning for each thing you are grateful for, that helps us better understand what you're sharing with us. I wonder if you could take a look at the size of your poster and see if you can make it fit better?
Nice work today! I can tell you worked hard in P4. - Miss Birtch
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Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteI like how you added your reasoning for each thing you are grateful for, that helps us better understand what you're sharing with us. I wonder if you could take a look at the size of your poster and see if you can make it fit better?
Nice work today! I can tell you worked hard in P4.
- Miss Birtch