I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thanks for sharing your DLO from CIP today. I would like to see some more writing in your introduction. What was the purpose of this task? What did you learn? Was it enjoyable?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your DLO from CIP today. I would like to see some more writing in your introduction. What was the purpose of this task? What did you learn? Was it enjoyable?
I know you are capable of much more writing! :)
- Miss Birtch