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Wednesday, 19 August 2020

100 Word challenge - Aliens

There was a man with his friends, Bryce and Tai. They were about to go on an adventure to outer space, their rocket ship wasn't very good and it could break at any moment. They lifted off the floor and were flying around. They were going so fast that their eyes were pushed all the way into their head. The ship broke in half, they were floating around now, Oh Gosh what do we do. Thought Bryce. Oh no we’re done. Thought Tai. “good bye guys see u another time” The ship landed on the moon” WE ARE ALL ALIVE”
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  1. Anonymous22 August 2020 at 19:02

    Kia ora Josh

    Thanks for sharing your 100 word challenge with us! Don't forget that a quality blog post also includes an introduction that explains what the task is about or what work you are sharing. Maybe also consider adding in the photo or video that inspired your writing, otherwise it could be a bit confusing to whomever is reading your work!

    - Miss Birtch

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