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Tuesday 4 August 2020

200 Word Challenge About A Bird



Today we needed to make a 200-word story about a song from Forrest Gump, it was a feather theme song. I made the story about a bird seeking food for its family, Enjoy!






This music reminds me of a lullaby that babies listen to to get to sleep. There once was a bird flying in the sky, seeking some food for its little babies. The bird drops to the floor and finds a bucket of worms. The bird tries to pick up the bucket, but it's too heavy. The bird grabs some worms and takes them back up to its nest, it gives the worms to the babies and they have a big feast. But then the bird leaves to pick up the bucket again, but it's gone!?, where did it go?






There was a man walking away holding the bucket in his hand. The bird tries to catch up and take more work, but he gets in a car and drives off, the bird keeps flying to find more food. He cannot find his family anymore, he keeps flying peacefully.





A hunter tried to shoot him but missed, and again and again until he finally hit the bird, luckily it only hit the bird's feather and it came off the bird, the feather slowly fell until it hit the hunter on the head. The bird finds its family and happy ever after...

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Josh!

    I enjoyed your creative writing about the birds. You used some really great imagery in your piece and it’s really nice to see you engaged and enjoying writing again in class.

    I hope we can do a different piece of music next week. Did you find this prompt easier than just a single photo? What do you prefer?

    - Miss Birtch

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  2. Hello Josh my name is Jesse and I liked the way you added punctuation in your writing it will help me with my punctuation.Next time when you do a blog you should add the music to go with the story I also really liked the way you made some of the story up in your head. Your sincerely Jesse

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