What sorts of things make a good friend? Being nice to each other, doing things together, going to places with each other.
What do people care about us do? Help us, make us proud of being us, care for us.
How do we know they have out back? They Stand up for us when we get bullied and stop the bullies.
What don't they do, Bully you with the bullies and stand up with the bullies.
What do you think about being a outstander means? Outstanding and wearing bright pink to represent the Pink Shirt Day.
How did the pink shirt boys show that they were good friends? They brought 50 shirts and emailed everyone they knew to support them.
The story of pink Shirt day <------
Kia ora Josh!
ReplyDeleteWell done on taking the feedback you received in class and making your post better. A suggestion for how your writing can improve would be to make sure that your sentences have lots of great details. When we look at your sentences, we should know what the question is asking, it's not just the answer. For example:
"Bully you with the bullies and stand up with the bullies" on it's own, doesn't tell us what the question is. But if you add in some more detail such as, " A good friend doesn't bully you with the bullies... etc" can you see how your message is more clear?
I would like to see you trying that for future blogs posts.
- Miss Birtch