I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thank you for sharing your music work with us. I wonder if next time you can challenge yourself with your DLO. I bet you could create something a bit more colourful and eye catching. I want to see you doing the right thing all the time, even when the teacher isn't watching! That would make me very proud to see your very best work.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kia ora Josh
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your music work with us. I wonder if next time you can challenge yourself with your DLO. I bet you could create something a bit more colourful and eye catching. I want to see you doing the right thing all the time, even when the teacher isn't watching! That would make me very proud to see your very best work.
- Miss Birtch