I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today my group all worked together
Cody is going to be walking on the beach
Saia is going to be digging in the sand
Tj is going to be doing pushups
I am going to be doing starjumps
It sounds like a bunch of people in your group have interesting jobs! I wonder if you could remember what good blogging structure looks like. Without an introduction and a conclusion, we don't know what context you're talking about!
What other details could you add so it's easier for us to understand?
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Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like a bunch of people in your group have interesting jobs! I wonder if you could remember what good blogging structure looks like. Without an introduction and a conclusion, we don't know what context you're talking about!
What other details could you add so it's easier for us to understand?
- Miss Birtch