Title:
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Penguins
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Introduction
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Live in the cold. Have feathers, don't get cold very often
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General statement
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They have collateral circulation in their feet
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Evaluation
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Antarctica is a cold and very wet. I would love to go there
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Draft:
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Penguins live in the cold. They have feathers and they have collateral circulations on their feet so they don't get cold. Antarctica is a cold and wet place and i would love to go there
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Friday 16 June 2017
Penguins
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