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Josh Antarctica
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Introduction
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Antarctica is a really cold place
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Characteristics
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Cold, desert, Very windy, stormy, bottom of the world
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Evaluation
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I love the looks of it i really want to go there
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Draft Writing
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BRRRRR! It's cold here. I can't believe it is this cold here. This is the coldest continent in the world. How do people live here. It is at the bottom of the world. Some months has sun and no night, some months is night and has no day. It is a desert because it never rains in antarctica and in other deserts it never rains too! Isn't that weird? I really love the looks of this place and i really want to go there.
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I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 6 June 2017
Antarctica
Antarctic is a very cold place
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