I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This year we have been doing work on Be There. This is one of our new values. It is about being there for people that need your help and being their in your learning and being focused.
Hi there Josh, I am Gustan from St Bernadette's school, I liked how the the message got across of being there for each other. Near the end of the slide show I could not see the writing so maybe next time you could use speech bubbles like at the start of the slide. I liked your work keep it up.
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Hi there Josh, I am Gustan from St Bernadette's school, I liked how the the message got across of being there for each other. Near the end of the slide show I could not see the writing so maybe next time you could use speech bubbles like at the start of the slide. I liked your work keep it up.
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