Dog In A Blanket
Hello, today in class for my 100-word challenge I wrote about a dog in a blanket.
There once was a dog with a blanket on his head, he was in a forest, he does not know how he got there, he was asleep happily then woke up in the middle of a forest with a blanket on his head. He is very confused and goes for a walk, he sees a dog park in the distance, he walks towards it and it disappears. Was he hallucinating? Or was someone tricking him and disappearing it every time he got close? He finally found his way out and got home safely to his kind caring family. The End
Good job Josh. You story is really good. Next time you should try using past tense. Instead of using he walks towards it you could use he walked towards it. But apart from that your story is good. Good Job.
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