There was a grizzly bear going through the forest looking for food, it saw a lake full of water and fish, he tries to cross the lake, the current was pulling him down to a waterfall, he was not going to let that happen, he keeps jumping trying to get across, he saw a fish in the water, he leaps for it and barely gets it But then he saw that he was about to fall, he very barely made it across the lake, then he happily ate the fish and went into hibernation , it was a very long hibernation.
Kia ora Josh!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your 100 word story. You had some nice ideas about the nature and environment around the bear. Did you enjoy doing the 100 word challenge? Next time make sure to check your punctuation, you have quite a few commas but not many full stops.
- Miss Birtch