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Thursday 28 September 2017

Te Manu Tukutuku poem

This week we had to make a poem About the new school. The reason i like it is because it is big and there is a big diamond shape that you can spin on and you can climb up to the top. I find it fun because you can go on the inside of it too. 
I can hear people cheering and chattering about Te Manu Tukutuku.
I can see people playing basket ball and having tons of fun.
The smell of the new school smells like the scent of the refreshing air.
The walls feel like I am touching clouds and the furniture feels like foam and lots of pillows.
This is a very nice and amazingly and awesome School called Te Manu Tukutuku.
Well done Mr Moriarty and his crew!

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