Persuade people to buy astick

This 2 weeks we have been trying to persuade people to buy stick but its no ordinary stick its a super stick. This is what i have done.

Introduction Hook / questions (no more than 3) Have you ever dreamed of having the amazing thing to just put some extra shine in your life? Did you ever think of one thing that could just fix your whole career? Do you need the perfect object for your Life? Introduce your stick - What you are selling Then i offer you this stick. It is 99% Wood and 1% super sonic brainpower. It can be your fanta-stick Pal.
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Main Point Paragraph 1 Help you	It can help you turn on/off your T.V If you can't be bothered walking over there. It can be a walking stick if you can’t walk properly
Main Point Paragraph 2 Save you	if someone is trying to rob you and it can be a weapon It can save you from sticky situations
Main Point Paragraph 3 Keep you company	At night it can sleep with you if you are scared . Wherever you are it sticks with you.
Conclusion Sum up what you have been talking about So go and get your stick that won’t leaf you behind

Persuade people to buy a stick

Have you ever dreamed of having the amazing thing to just put some extra shine in your life?  Did you ever think of one thing that could just fix your whole career?  Do you need the perfect object for your Life? Well I offer you this amazing stick. It can help you, save you and keep you company.

Firstly, it can help you turn on/off your T.V If you can't be bothered walking over there you can just poke the T.V with a stick. It can be a walking stick if you can’t walk properly you can lean on it for support.

Secondly, It can save you by if someone is trying to rob you and it can be a weapon and It can save you from sticky situations.

The Last reason, at night it can sleep with you and watch over you.  If you are scared of the dark it will be looking over you because sticks can’t sleep.(which sounds a bit creepy)

It may even make your friends jealous. It will stick to you for life. it is 99% wood and 1% super sonic brain power. And it's not plastic.

So Go to your nearest shop and look for the amazing stick for only 1 dollar, and just remember it is limited addition.