Collaborative Success Criteria
- The correct structure of a persuasive text including an introduction, with a hook and your opinion, 3 body paragraphs and a conclusion.
- Persuasive vocabulary and phrases that convince people
- The reasons why with supporting ideas
The Purrfect Pet
Did you know, Cats are Purrfect?
I think Miss McLeod should get a cat because Cats are cuddly and cute, they are playful and they don’t need much attention.
Firstly, Cats are cuddly and cute because they have lots of fur. cats are also soft and cuddly because they can curl up on your lap and make you and them go to sleep.
A second reason,
Cats are playful because you can play games with them
And they are really good at those games
Third,
They don't need much attention because they can play games with them self and clean themselves without needing a bath or a big wash. They don’t need to play with people lots as they can play with themselves
Overall, You Should get a cat because they are just the purrfect pet. So go to the nearest pet shop and buy the purrfect pet!
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