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Friday, 31 May 2019

revolution tour

hello i'm Josh and I will be talking about the revolution tour from Tuesday.

Someone called Reggie Dabs Came. first he introduced himself and his Friends/Helpers, then he had dancers come up and dance to a song. the memo of the whole things was to stand up for people getting bullied and he brought up some people one was the shyest person, one was the funniest person, one was the athletic, the best teacher and the smartest person.

i liked him rooming this year and last year and hope he comes again.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 May 2019 at 09:44

    Hi Josh

    I like how you have have told us what the group was called and what the game was about.

    Next time you could add more writing and add some pictures.

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  2. Anonymous5 June 2019 at 22:18

    Hi Josh

    Thanks for reflecting on the Revolution Tour and doing it with only one arm!! You got quite a bit of work done despite being injured. I wonder if you could please check where your capitals go, I know you know how to edit your own work.

    - Miss Birtch

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