I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Monday, 29 October 2018
Post malone
Post Malone is a very famous singer and rapper. He is 23 years old.
It looks like 7Ds is learning some really cool research skills. I wonder if you could have made it clearer to your readers what class you were completing this work for?
How could you have explained some context for this Post Malone blog post?
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Post Malone is a very famous singer and rapper. He is 23 years old.
Kia ora Josh!
ReplyDeleteIt looks like 7Ds is learning some really cool research skills. I wonder if you could have made it clearer to your readers what class you were completing this work for?
How could you have explained some context for this Post Malone blog post?
- Miss Birtch